From:
Sent:
To: Gary S. Gevisser
Subject: RE: soul
The price of soul…the price is higher for the haves as
compared to the have-nots wouldn’t you agree? J
As for a request for a critique, I think that if someone had never
been in correspondence with you, had no idea who you are or where you are
coming from, they would delete the email somewhere around getting to the
“January 3rd 2002,” point in your email.
They will likely be thinking they received it in error, but
curiosity would bring them to at least that point. No offense intended, but it
is lengthy and somewhat cryptic.
I am indeed receiving your emails, and still reading them with
interest.
Hope your weekend was good, have a great week.
Ian
-----Original Message-----
From: Gary S. Gevisser
Sent:
To: Ian A. Kaye
Subject: soul
Ian
– I’m having a few “problems” with my
“network” and although I have it “figured” that you get
blind copied on every broadcasted email you may not have received this last one.
I
have been “holding back” on fully answering your 2 questions for the simple reason I
am looking for more “viewpoints” than the one I have
which is “good” on the one hand that we are all
coming “to-get-her” [sic] but “bad”
in the sense I might end up dying the richest person in the grave
sooner than I “hoped.”
On
the other hand
I know it is not up to me
anyone
else when our time is up, not to suggest it is preordained; on the contrary it
is all a function of maintaining “balance”.
One
cannot, however, dismiss the “still waters”
and so I am looking for more of the type of critique you have given me in the
past.
When
you look at the “last one” I just want to know how
someone you know reading it without knowing anything about me would
“view” it, first from the standpoint of “interest”,
how long before they would be “bored” and second able
to “see” the connecting dots with your question of
“pricing”, although your verbiage, “Have you ever been tempted
to become a part of it and live in blissful ignorance with the shiny
things?” didn’t
mention anything about “the price of soul”!
Enjoy
the weekend.
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