From: Gary S. Gevisser
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To: Glenn Shapiro
Cc: rest;
Subject: RE: # is the essence....
I am at the DMV along with other serfers waiting in endless lines
thinking of what it would take to get each and every one of their emails and
then to ask them to help me in describing what it is that I have accomplished
to do without spending a single cent on marketing and advertising in holding
the most rapacious elitists in the world in a paralyzed state, the same folks
responsible for having [us serfers] wait in endless lines, the game of life
like the game of chess getting your opponent to play to your advantage....
Got to get back in line.
gg
-----Original Message-----
From: Glenn Shapiro [mailto:gshapiro@eeiconferences.com]
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Subject: RE: # is the essence....
Take the so called 4th grade
paragraph and try again -- for what you wrote is a combination of first grade grammar (run-on sentences
notwithstanding), 5th grade words, and communication of a concept that few
would understand.)
“When u wake up in the morning and look at
your father, mother, brother and sister be4 moving on to each and everyone else
u think u know and realize that u really don’t know anything about the
“make up” they put on to hide their very likely checker board past
finding, however, comfort when looking in the mirror as prescribed by those at
the time of the first symposium to reflect on yourself each and every moment of
the day then u will find an everlasting peace, agree?”
I have come to the conclusion that you
cannot write [i.e. you have no experience in writing letters] and you want to
be an author. So your proposal sounds like: "I can't play music but
can you help me get a zillion dollar recording
contract?.
I know you have a concept
but you need to be able to describe it -- and I don't think you can. I have
heard you talk around it (in circles) but you
have yet to tell me what it is that a publisher is actually going to buy from you.
