From:
Adam Tucker
Sent:
To: gsg@sellnext.com
Subject: RE:
The email and the intro to MM1 is good. The content
is it’s strongest asset but the delivery is not
as strong. You need a good editor when you get things going that will be able
to keep you focused and help organize where the content should be. As powerful
as your message is, it will be worthless if no one reads it.
As for reading, I personally don’t like the
use of “Or” to transition from thoughts. If this is a novelty for
attracting attention in the preface to the book or in the introduction to the
author than I think it might be appropriate, but otherwise I would leave them
out. This is your first book as far as I know and I have never written anything
so take my opinion with a grain of salt…
An interesting possibly off topic possibly
not… I love “sayings” and yesterday my uncle Pete told me a
good one. I guess it was a quote from General Patton… “The only way
to assure victory is to cut off all paths of retreat” now I might be
paraphrasing but Pete told me this because of my constant turmoil in deciding
what I want to do with my life (career wise).
Any way, I wish I had more time to help but in my
journey to figure out the above mentioned, I have a few jobs to tend to.
Talk to you soon,
-----Original Message-----
From:
Sent:
To: Glenn Shapiro
Subject:
Glenn good morning – I
was up rather early this morning doing the risk “assessemt”
[sic]
thing but soon ran into problems with my internet wireless connection, it seems
there is a guiding force that prevents me from getting caught up in other
peoples’ wars.
I decided to stop playing
with the antennae and find some gain in putting down “on
paper” the introduction to MM1 that I began thinking
about when in
The Dow I believe is still
above 10,000 any idea of what it will be if trading isn’t immediately
suspended, worse yet if our GREAT GREAT
President is not re-elected?
Take care, but don’t
hold back on knocking the crap out of my flank if the introduction deserves
being tossed in the wastepaper basket, my poor excuse of Pypeetoe keeping Marie
and I up all last night his incessant barking no doubt falling on deaf ears.
gg