From: DaNielle
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Subject: Input – Educational Light Journal - One tribe of achievers.
I liked this a lot, and I think it will make an
impact. The only part I find confusing/unclear/choppy
is the primary paragraphs. Perhaps I have little
knowledge about the subject, therefor, I had a harder
time grasping the information?
Overall, easy to understand and the information is structured well. I especially compliment you on the "Turn on the Light" and "When the light is on".
Danielle
P.s- I only received one copy, I think it was the
edited version.